Analyze the following paragraph for coherence and cohesion. Identify the main is...

Questão de Inglês da banca Unesc aplicada no concurso Prefeitura de Três Barras SC (2024). Confira a resolução completa abaixo:

Analyze the following paragraph for coherence and cohesion. Identify the main issues and suggest improvements:

"The rainforest is home to many species. Deforestation is a major problem. Animals lose their habitats. Conservation efforts are increasing. The government needs to take action."